Friday, October 31, 2014

7th Grade Unit of Study: Realistic Fiction



7th Grade Unit of Study:
Realistic Fiction

Writers must submit via google docs a draft by Sunday, November 2.  Be sure to put a proper heading on the paper.  See below:

Kathy Vogel
5th hour
November 2, 2014
Realistic Fiction Draft 2

Realistic Fiction Checklist

I created a narrative that has realistic characters, tension, and change; and that not only convey but  also develops an idea, lesson, or theme.

  • I wrote a beginning that not only sets the story in motion, it also grounds it in a place or situation. It includes details that will later be important to the story. These details might point to the central issue  or conflict, show how story elements connect, or hint at key character traits.

  • I used transitional phrases as well as paragraphs for organization

  • I gave the reader a sense of closure by showing clearly how the character or place changed or the problem was resolved. If there was no resolution, I gave details to leave the reader thinking about a central idea or theme.

  • I used a traditional - or slightly modified - story structure (rising action, conflict, falling action) to best bring out the meaning of his story and reach his audience.

  • I developed the action, dialogue, details, and inner thinking to convey an issue, idea, or lesson. I showed what is specific about the central character. I developed the setting and the characters’ relationship to the setting.

  • I developed change in characters and situations. I used specific details and figurative language to help the reader understand the  place and the mood (making an object or place symbolic, using the weather, using repetition). I used varied tone to match variety of emotions experienced by the characters across the story.

  • I used resources to check sure my spelling was accurate


8th Grade Unit of Study: Investigative Journalism



8th Grade Unit of Study:
Investigative Journalism
Narrative Nonfiction

Find an issue that will matter to others.

  • Present background knowledge on issue (could be the at beginning for a lead)
  • Include anecdotes (stories, and examples)
  • Include 2 direct quotes (from the interviews conducted)
  • Adhere to journalistic tone
  • Use a story to teach a lesson, comment on a social issue, and/or develop a point of view.
  • Incorporates transitional phrases
  • Circles back to central idea/issue or leaves the reader feeling a sense of closure at the ending
  • Uses paragraphs as a way to organize your article and best bring out the meaning of your story and reach the audience
  • Uses action, dialogue, details, inner thinking to convey an issue, idea or lesson
  • Uses specific details and figurative language to help the reading understand.
  • Varies tone to match the variety of emotions
  • Uses resources to check spelling
  • Varies sentence structure and correctly punctuates dialogue correctly (especially when including interviews)

Please submit a copy of your paper by Sunday, November 2 via google docs. You will also need to print a copy for your portfolio. Be sure to put a heading on all papers. See below:

Kathy Vogel
3rd hour
November 2,2014
Investigative Journalism



Monday, October 13, 2014

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Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Weekly Writing

As students grow as writers, one important element is choice. Students will have ample choice in our writing workshop. Part of the work writers do in their notebook is generating or collecting ideas for future drafts. As writers gather and collect ideas in their language arts notebook, they may use those ideas to compose three one page writing entries.  Writing entries can be completed in the notebook, through google docs, or a blog. Our goal is to engage students in digital writing as part of their experience as a writer. Weekly, students need to write outside of class. Typically on Mondays, we will monitor weekly writing which is worth 10 points.  All entries must have a title and date.

For many of the writing entries, writers have choice about their topic. For writers who are struggling, we encourage them to use the following to help generate a topic:  heart map, scar map, neighborhood map, expert list, bank of experiences (8th grade) and other entries from their notebook.


Monday, September 29, 2014

Where I am From Poem


"Where I am From Poem"

Students studied a mentor text, "Where I am From" by George Ella Lyon. Students then wrote a poem of their own. The rubric for this assignment is available. Final drafts are due this Thursday.

Where I'm From

Where I'm From

I am from clothespins,
from Clorox and carbon-tetrachloride.
I am from the dirt under the back porch.
(Black, glistening,
it tasted like beets.)
I am from the forsythia bush
the Dutch elm
whose long-gone limbs I remember
as if they were my own.

I'm from fudge and eyeglasses,
from Imogene and Alafair.
I'm from the know-it-alls
and the pass-it-ons,
from Perk up! and Pipe down!
I'm from He restoreth my soul
with a cottonball lamb
and ten verses I can say myself.

I'm from Artemus and Billie's Branch,
fried corn and strong coffee.
From the finger my grandfather lost
to the auger,
the eye my father shut to keep his sight.
Under my bed was a dress box
spilling old pictures,
a sift of lost faces
to drift beneath my dreams.
I am from those moments--
snapped before I budded --
leaf-fall from the family tree.

George Ella Lyon

Thursday, September 18, 2014

Book talk about Animal farm

Sean Huizing, an eighth grader, book talked Animal Farm. Click on the link to see his thoughts about Animal Farm. Youtube animal farm book talk

Monday, September 15, 2014

Gathering Potential Writing Topics



One way to grow as a writer is to gather future writing ideas.  Over the course of the year, we will explore various ways to gather potential writing ideas.  To gather potential writing ideas, students will create the following:

7th Grade Mining Ideas:

Monday - Heart Map
Tuesday- Pick one topic from the heart map to write about
Wednesday - Neighborhood Map - number the potential topics to write about
Thursday - Scar/Injury Map and pick one scar or injury to write about

 8th Grade Mining Ideas:
Monday - Writing Territories List
Wednesday - Bank of Experiences
Friday- Pictures are Worth a Thousand Words